misshepeshu: (Default)
[personal profile] misshepeshu
(Disclaimer: Not autobiographical, though I've known a few people with eating disorders, and the protagonist is an amalgam of two in particular. What I'm posting here is an exercise I wrote in poetry class that I wanted to share.)

She eats a cup of unflavored fat-free yogurt, her second and last meal of the day. Each meal is a sacrament, requiring its own sacramental rituals. For yogurt, there is first the slow downward swoop of the spoon, bowl side down, and then a gentle skim along the top. The convex surface gathers a layer of creaminess as ardently and as carefully as a pilgrim kissing a dead saint’s foot. As she lifts the spoon, the tip of her tongue reaches out, the head of a blind slug yearning for contact. The tang of the yogurt sends an electric buzz through her tastebuds. She licks the spoon clean in one thorough catlike swipe, and then it’s back again to the beginning.

On good days, she is able to extend the meal to half an hour, or one hundred careful swipes of her tongue.

She views herself as kindred to the nuns who have renounced the earthly world in favor of a life dedicated to the spirit. She, too, has renounced the folly of flesh, but her God is a God of bones. He is a God of hollows. Most of all, he is a God of numbers. The number of calories she shuttles into her body. The numbers on a bathroom scale ticking downwards, always downwards. The number of times she can lick the spoon before she empties the container. Her grandmother used to tell her, “You value beauty more than your life,” but this is what her grandmother never understood: beauty is life. She is a sculptor, carving away all unnecessary flesh, all of which she offers to her God like Abraham binding Isaac on the mountain.

Date: 2010-11-18 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theotherjay.livejournal.com
That's terribly creepy and depressing, but of course you knew that...

Date: 2010-11-19 12:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ratatosk.livejournal.com
The problem with posting things like this is that then people know you are capable of it.

I'm glad you had the courage to post it anyway; that sort of thing always terrifies me.

Also, I take issue with your choice of tag. :)

Date: 2010-11-19 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misshepeshu.livejournal.com
I should add a disclaimer to the post--it's an exercise for my poetry class, and while I have some...I don't want to use the word "severe," because they haven't caused any clinical problems, but let's just say that I have difficulties with self-image that have never morphed into eating disorders, though I've contemplated taking the leap a few times in my life. The poem came from that part of me and that part of my experience of being a person.

I'm glad I take issue with the tag :) .

Date: 2010-11-19 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misshepeshu.livejournal.com
That would be "I'm glad you take issue with the tag." I blame the typo on the fact that a very furry cat lies between me and my laptop, making typing a more complicated endeavor than usual.

Profile

misshepeshu: (Default)
misshepeshu

December 2013

S M T W T F S
1 234567
891011121314
15161718192021
2223242526 2728
293031    

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Sep. 23rd, 2017 12:06 am
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios